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29/04/2015
New Business Award Reaches Climax
AcademicBusiness BTEC

The final of the inaugural Headmaster’s Business Project Award competition took place on Friday 24 April, with six finalists from Year 12 and Year 13 battling out for the top prize. Sixth Form Business students were tasked with compiling a video documentary outlining the use of the marketing mix in the fashion industry, combined with an advert to market a product of their choice.

Year 12 pupils Guy Pollard, George Atkinson and Jack Tooley, alongside Year 13s Emma Haynes, Barney Aldridge and Josh Hemsley, were selected to progress to the final from over 100 applicants. The initial filtering proved a difficult task for Head of Business Mr Andrew White and Media expert Mr Marcus Milburn, with numerous strong candidates emerging from the field. The videos, which typically ranged from 4-6 minutes in length, were assessed across a number of criteria. Mr Milburn focussed on the editing skills and quality of the documentary, while Mr White was naturally most interested in the correct use of business terminology and evidence of a sound understanding of the topics covered, most pertinently the marketing mix.

After the candidates were whittled down to six, Mr White and Mr Milburn invited a guest judging panel to join them in determining the overall winners. College Governor and successful boating businessman Jonathan Hobbs kindly offered his time to share his expertise with candidates, in addition to the Headmaster, Mr Bloor (Teacher of Business and Economics), Mr Bluck (Head of Economics) and Mr McSweeny (Director of Marketing). In addition to their documentary and business knowledge, judges were asked to critique candidates’ presentation skills and ability to engage the audience. The four categories were combined to give an overall score out of 20 for each judge, yielding a grand total of 140.

Barney Aldridge was the first to showcase his project to the judges. He chose to focus on Nike’s ‘magista’ football boots. With the footwear retailing at over £200, Nike rely heavily on the strength of their brand in order to sell the product in bulk. Barney’s advert featured strong imagery with a good combination of music and narration, and after a nervous opening he fielded questions in an impressive manner. Further use of business terminology and explanation of the marketing mix ‘4Ps’ could have earned more valuable points from the judges. Up next was Josh Hemsley, whose comprehensive introduction to the Nike brand demonstrated a good level of background research. Josh’s business knowledge and endearing honesty proved a hit, but his decision not to add any original footage or narration to his text-based video proved costly.

The final Year 13 entrant was Emma Haynes. Emma immediately grabbed the attention of the judges with her personable nature and infectious enthusiasm coming to the fore. Emma’s documentary was split very clearly into a promotional advert and subsequent analysis of Nike’s marketing strategies. Emma chose to focus on a new style of running trainers, and produced a high quality advert including striking close-up shots and effective use of blur and focus. Emma’s understanding of price, promotion, product and place was immediately made clear, and the judges unanimously selected Emma as a deserving Year 13 winner. Emma’s video is available to watch below:

The Year 12 trio focussed on high-end fashion brand Gucci. Guy Pollard made an instant impression by shaking the hand of each judge in turn, and made an extremely confident pitch. Guy had ‘gone the extra mile’ by visiting Gucci’s flagship Bond Street store in person, to conduct some market research with their sales director. This clearly paid off as Guy’s knowledge of the brand was second to none. Technical issues gave Guy a significant disadvantage, as he was unable to include sound in his documentary. To his credit, he thought on his feet and prepared a detailed narration to accompany the moving images. This earned considerable praise from the judges, but crucial marks were lost as his documentary did not quite match the level of his competitors. George Atkinson was another confident presenter, and displayed sound business understanding. His documentary was attention-grabbing with a bold choice of music, but the judges commented that this actually distracted their focus from the main purpose of the video.

The Year 12 winner was Jack Tooley, who focused on marketing a luxury Gucci watch worth over £600. Jack made a hesitant start, but his confidence grew and he answered some difficult questions from the judges with great assurance. His excellent documentary featured a significant amount of business content, with an imaginative, punchy advert followed by a strong explanation of Gucci’s marketing strategies. Jack emphasised the effectiveness of celebrity endorsement, with Cristiano Ronaldo used by Gucci as a role model to drive further sales. Remarkably, Jack compiled the entire documentary on his iPhone, demonstrating impressive editing skills in spite of the limited software available to him. Jack’s video is available to watch below:

Organiser Mr White was delighted with how the students responded to the project brief: ‘This is the first year we have run the award, and I am delighted with how things went. I would like to thank the judging panel, in particular Mr Hobbs, for giving up their time to support the initiative. The students gained a great deal from participating, and the documentaries will support the coursework element of their Business course. Congratulations to Emma and Jack, who emerged victorious from a strong group of finalists.’